Re: Did I get it right the first time?
Posted by Roger Hunter on March 19, 2006 at 12:44:24:

Petra;

a few points

Take your picture off. You're too young and beautiful to be taken seriously.

"Please contact me if you have additional [a] questions via e-mail."
Remove [a]

Sample map is too cluttered to understand.

The prediction map makes it look like Mettler is a quake hit. Needs to be clarified.

The print is TOO SMALL for these aging eyes!

Roger


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     ● Re: Did I get it right the first time? - Cathryn  12:48:46 - 3/19/2006  (34908)  (0)
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        ● Re: Did I get it right the first time? Thank You - Petra  13:06:57 - 3/19/2006  (34910)  (1)
           ● Re: Did I get it right the first time? Thank You - Roger Hunter  14:28:26 - 3/19/2006  (34915)  (1)
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                    ● Don't You Dare !!!!! - Petra  01:07:27 - 3/20/2006  (34954)  (2)
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